Tuesday, November 24, 2009


She rushed inside the room and banged the door shut.

She flung her bag in a corner and collapsed on the bed.
She tucked her hair behind her ear and stared at the ceiling fan above her.
She breathed in and drew her knees close to her chest.
She wrapped her arms around herself and coiled like a fetus in the womb.
And then...

She cried.
The cry was harsh. The cry was bitter. The cry was one of anguish. The cry was one of fury.
Her tears intermingled with the kohl in her lifeless eyes ran like a dark venomous rivulet.
She cried her heart out...but there was always some more hurt lingering.
And she cried some more.

She stared at the circling fan above for what seemed forever.
This was the 6th time in a row.
A boy had broken her heart.
A boy had left her all alone.
A boy had left her without any love.

Yet another time somebody, a man, had stolen her girlfriend away from her...The one she had loved...and lost. Again.

F****** B****** She yelled out loud.

11 cows believe I'm awesome. Do you?:

freelancer said...

i didnt get the last para. a man stole her galfriend??
she's not straight???

soin said...

so again the guy is blamed han? convenient..free

*Shreya* said...

@freelancer... there you go! you got it!!!

@soin...thats not MY point of view. its a piece of fiction...

Anonymous said...

she curse boys,even she is not straight.Have some Merci for boys..

*Shreya* said...

exactly why that post was from someone 'anonymous'...my 5th girlfriend eh? or 4th? =|

soin said...

i meant the girl in the story only..

Chatterbox @ The Dialogue said...

That was fiction with a big twist.

Keep writing Shreya :)


Sameera said...

One super twist in the end...!


Pooja Mahimkar said...

i like it..esp. the last part.

Lackadaisical Lullaby said...

This was Nyce.
Douche bag males, she is NOT picking on your kinky species, but if that's what you want to think, then by all means bash yourselves. ;)
Kudos Shreya, nice one.
Es what always happens, no?

Anonymous said...

What a great web log. I spend hours on the net reading blogs, about tons of various subjects. I have to first of all give praise to whoever created your theme and second of all to you for writing what i can only describe as an fabulous article. I honestly believe there is a skill to writing articles that only very few posses and honestly you got it. The combining of demonstrative and upper-class content is by all odds super rare with the astronomic amount of blogs on the cyberspace.